I wish I could submit this to a bunch of Marvel/Avengers groups and pimp my shit, but if you guys saw those pages from Issue 3 - I seriously don't have the energy to submit this to 30+ different groups. I'll let you guys do all the submitting.
This is a birthday gift to my friend Ian, the last of us Tracyites still in conversation. And trust me, this looks a LOT better on my printer than it does here-- better than my webcomic, at least, which looks like I printed it on black construction paper.
BLACK WIDOW (C) MARVEL ART BY ME, AARON MOCKSING FLASH MX PRO 2004 COMPUTER MOUSE
Drawing people is a must for every person who lives and draws. That is what you did here, and should continue doing. Because you really to improve through practice.
You definitely have vision, cause I am more than familiar with the boring and the mediocre. Her expression, pose and pistol all speak to me and leave an impact.
However, on the technical side of things it is far from perfect. Her left arm is unnecessarily straight. Why would it be? It should not. Her left foot is pointing inwards. Not only that makes no sense in terms of balance, but is hard to do. No human would do that, and neither should your character.
And last, but not least, her nose is too short and too high. The lips are too high as well.
You definitely have vision, cause I am more than familiar with the boring and the mediocre. Her expression, pose and pistol all speak to me and leave an impact.
However, on the technical side of things it is far from perfect. Her left arm is unnecessarily straight. Why would it be? It should not. Her left foot is pointing inwards. Not only that makes no sense in terms of balance, but is hard to do. No human would do that, and neither should your character.
And last, but not least, her nose is too short and too high. The lips are too high as well.
Aside from these issues, everything is fine.
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